16 December 2009

[puisi] Sebuah Permintaan

Aku ingin menghabiskan waktu bersamamu,
sampai jatah usia tak lagi tersisa,
sampai detak jantung tak lagi bersuara,
sampai nyawa tak lagi ada di dalam raga.
Bolehkah..?

16122009
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12 comments:

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  2. i'm singing this song now..:)
    sms suami aahh :)

    makasih mas ipin, salam utk mbak ridha :)

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  3. @latansa
    makasih buat apresiasinya :)

    @mba retnadi
    hehehe, tadi juga puisi ini saya sms-in ke yayang ^_^
    btw, istri saya namanya ridha bukan rinda *wah, beda huruf dikit sih, tapi bisa berabe tuh* :D

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  4. haduuuh, maaf salah ketik mas, iya mbak ridha innatika
    maaf lahir batin ya
    salam utk mbak ridha :)

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  5. dududuh,,so sweet banget opa omanya

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  6. bukan satu hari..tapi selamanya
    bukan satu detik...tapi tak tertunda
    bukan hanya lagi tentang cinta...
    tapi tentang kebersamaan..

    bolehkah??

    nice ipin....^^

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  7. btw, lagu apa tuh...(gak bisa dengerin.. =P)

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  8. keren mas... membaca ini sambil mendengarkan what a wonderful world kayaknya pas banget... he he he

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  9. @mba retnadi
    hehehe, gpp, santai aja mba ^_^ salam juga buat mas catur ^_^

    @alwaysselalu
    walah.... :D

    @rafa1331
    begitukah..? ^_^

    @ivoniezahra
    masa sih..? ^_^

    @amathonthe
    iya, bisa sampe tua gituh ya ^_^

    @isyanasrg
    hehehe, thanks tambahannya :D
    klo lirik lagu yang tertulis di gambar pertama itu lagunya Adam Sandler, I Wanna Grow Old With You
    lirik lengkapnya:

    I wanna make you smile, whenever you're sad.
    Carry you around when your arthritis is bad.
    All I wanna do, is grow old with you.

    I'll get you medicine, when your tummy aches.
    Build you a fire if the furnace breaks.
    Oh it could be so nice, growin' old with you.

    I'll miss you, kiss you,
    Give you my coat when you are cold.
    Need you, feed you.
    Even let you hold the remote control.

    So let me do the dishes in our kitchen sink.
    Put you to bed when you've had too much to drink.
    Oh I could be the man, who grows old with you.

    I wanna grow old with you.


    klo lagu yang di-embed ke postingan ini, judulnya sama, I wanna grow old with you, yang nyanyiin si West Life

    Another day, without your smile
    Another day just passes by
    But now I know, how much it means
    For you to stay, right here with me

    The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
    But it hurt so bad I can't take it any longer

    reff:
    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna die lying in your arms
    I wanna grow old with you
    I wanna be looking in your eyes
    I wanna be there for you
    Sharing everything you do
    I wanna grow old with you

    A thousand miles between us now
    It causes me to wonder how
    Our love tonight remains so strong
    It makes our risk right all along

    The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
    But it hurt so bad I can't take it any longer

    *reff

    Things can come and go I know but
    Baby I believe
    Something's burning strong between us
    Makes it clear to me

    *reff



    @archoholic
    makasih buat apresiasinya ^_^

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